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The Uproaring Silence's avatar

I ve always thought that the last sentence is the most important!! (I ve written some that I am personally proud of although I am yet to share any of my texts) Now I realize I should have thought of something to make the reader want to go til the last sentence before I think of publishing anything!

Thank you Neil!

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Lynn Addison's avatar

Which editor? I like the echoing. As it was published, I just stop. And think. Hm, oh, I get it. Now there are few enough caribou that you actually CAN count them. And then the quote confirms that I figured it out. Eh. I like the words vanished and echo. Accurate AND poetic. Kills two caribou with one stone.

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